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03/01/2010 03:10:58 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club.
First impressions are that this has a great style to it.
Technically this is good. The lighting is good, composition is great, DOF is used well.
Artistically I have to agree with many of the commenter's that the nail polish bottle is more of a distraction than an asset here. If it weren't in the frame then we'd have a great line being formed with the legs and the shoes but we now have an "L" shape for our eyes to follow. The shot tells a great story, or at least it let's our minds create a story and that's what you want from a shot, something that engages the viewer.
In summary a great shot that has potential to be even better.
Feel free to PM me if you have any queries.
Gerry |
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02/28/2010 02:55:22 PM |
| the polish adds a nice touch |
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02/25/2010 01:35:29 PM |
| DADGUM!!!! GREAT SHOT!!!!! If I were voting this would be a 10!!! WOW!!! |
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02/23/2010 09:56:55 PM |
| Superb! DOF brilliant! Makeup container (okay I'm a guy ... Is it nail polish?) a brilliant addition. |
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02/22/2010 10:17:46 AM |
| I'd not have included the bottle of nail polish. To me it pulls my eye away from the shoes. Love the DOF. |
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02/22/2010 01:28:53 AM |
| Very nicely done. Excellent dof. |
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02/22/2010 01:03:11 AM |
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02/22/2010 12:47:52 AM |
| not even sure how to comment on this image. Great use of shallow depth of field. The elements you've presented um..really tell a story. Wow... |
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02/22/2010 12:32:05 AM |
Great use of shallow DOF. Thinking if it would be better without the bottle...
Raj |
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