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07/12/2004 07:46:56 AM |
Hello Dirk from the Critique Club,
Composition
Wall as a backdrop to sandalled feet propped up providing the main subject. Hmm, the off centre positioning adds a bit of interest and the legs provide depth but maybe this is an occasion where symmetry might have been beneficial.
Focus
The depth of field is good, right from the knees to the wall.
Exposure
Full range from black to white, with some detail in the shadows and only a little loss of detail in the highlights. Shot fast enough to freeze any camera movement, giving a solid image. Probably best in B & W.
Challenge
Maybe your intentions were a little too subtle for your audience - the "extraordinary" was clearly in your mind but you failed to convey it to most of your audience.
Overall
I'm not sure what this was about - completing the photographer's comments box would help the critiquer! Not really my cup of tea but keep submitting, your B& W style shown here would benefit a more striking subject.
Hugh
(Username hughletheren)
Any comments or reactions, feel free to contact me. |
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07/02/2004 01:58:37 AM |
| I'm not sure what this is... are you standing on a wall? If that is what this is, the feet need to be planted against the wall. The composition just doesn't strike me. Perhaps it would have been better in color? |
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07/01/2004 05:44:52 PM |
| whos to say what Extraordinary is ... i dont really know myself so nice shot. not sure what he is doing or what you are trying to show us but good d/f and contrast 6 |
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07/01/2004 09:41:20 AM |
| I'm glad you think so.... because I dont see it (you are joking, right?) |
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07/01/2004 09:22:50 AM |
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07/01/2004 06:41:53 AM |
| Is he suppose to be walking on the wall? If so then awesome composition. 8 |
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06/30/2004 04:40:33 PM |
| A photo of feet propped up on a wall. Not to extraordinary. Might have worked better if the feet were more firmly planted on the surface. |
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06/30/2004 04:08:00 PM |
| Wow, you can stand! lol If this is a wall than good but try to give the viewer a reference point. |
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