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07/04/2004 09:54:35 PM |
| A nice shot but seems a bit tilted to the right, not sure why. Maybe if you had come at her more head on instead of from the angle you did? I like the backdrop, nice contrast to her white shirt and jeans but the lighting seems a bit dull overall. Too muted, leaving the shot looking dull overall. A 5 |
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07/04/2004 07:50:05 PM |
Lighting: Low light, low contrast. More light is needed, as well as a reflector or something to get rid of the shadows making bags under her eyes.
Pose: Very nice pose.
Background: Works well. |
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07/04/2004 03:13:38 PM |
| Lighting on the subject's face needed, but just enough to keep the blouse from being the major impact in this image. |
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07/04/2004 12:47:06 PM |
| I like this as a candid shot. For "portrait" (especially if "studio") I think it would be stronger if cropped to just a head nad shoulders shot, with her lips at about the lower-right 1/3-line intersection. |
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07/04/2004 12:25:14 PM |
Nicely posed/composed. Lighting is a tad bit flat (or maybe your levels). Could definatly benefit from catchlight in her eyes. Nice casual feel here. Are you getting negative feed back about the studio part of the challenge discription?
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07/04/2004 09:42:21 AM |
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07/02/2004 11:50:58 AM |
| Nicely composed; would like a crop from the top to bring her into the frame more. Perhaps a levels adjustment or some slight dodging to highlight her a bit more? She seems a tad dark on my monitor. :o) |
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07/01/2004 05:35:09 PM |
| A nice expressive portrait. She looks a bit too sad, perhaps, while it seems you were going for wistful. I'm one of those who thinks of "studio" as an inside place--so it's not quite perfect for the challenge, in my opinion. |
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07/01/2004 11:04:47 AM |
| good potential but really looks underexposed by about a stop or so |
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06/30/2004 05:52:17 PM |
| good pose and background. Just a tad bit under exposed |
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06/30/2004 05:34:03 PM |
I like: the pose,background,face expression and the model.
Don't like: lighting,it is kind of even but not intense enough.
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06/30/2004 02:04:27 PM |
| seems a bit dark toward the top of the pic, maybe you could have cropped off about half of the space above her head |
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06/29/2004 10:01:10 PM |
| Very emotional in unusual light. Looks like model has been crying to me. |
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06/29/2004 05:33:06 PM |
| Nice, but the lack of lighting is holding this photo back. |
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06/29/2004 04:50:53 PM |
| I like having a story behind the photo, even if I don't know what it is =). I think the lighting could be a bit better, but it does give it that forbodding/sad mood. |
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06/29/2004 02:55:22 PM |
| Her face isn't very well lit, which is what you want to draw attention to ... and her pose seems a bit awkward. Pretty girl. |
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06/29/2004 02:16:53 PM |
| Beautiful and captivating model, I like her pose. I do wish the lighting was better so there was more seperation between her and the background wall. I feel the wall to her right, picture left is too dark. |
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06/29/2004 08:20:13 AM |
A little more lighting on the subject would have made this a top shot.
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06/28/2004 09:41:38 PM |
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06/28/2004 06:04:15 PM |
| It's not 100% (don't ask me what's missing) but I like it. (7) |
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06/28/2004 03:06:32 PM |
| Her makeup looks shiny and unnatural when compared to the casual outfit and setting. |
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06/28/2004 03:01:51 PM |
Really nice capture
I like the crop and the fact that there has been some thought behind the shot
Good luck |
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06/28/2004 02:53:50 PM |
| Nice pose. Something about the lighting is not quite right...a little bit of levels adjustment would make it a lot better. I tried it on this photo...try moving the black levels slider to 200 and the gray slider to 1.15 |
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06/28/2004 12:07:10 PM |
| I think less stone and an over all tighter crop would of improved this. I like her pose but would of liked more light on her nice face. |
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06/28/2004 12:03:25 PM |
| I like the wall with the big uneven bricks, but the pose is very cliche and therefore looks artificial |
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06/28/2004 11:06:11 AM |
| A tighter crop? It feels out of balance with all that stone. The colors are so nice, as is the pose and the sad expression, I think it would be stunning with a much tighter crop. |
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