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04/08/2010 03:19:39 PM |
Hi from Critique Club.
Here are my comments about Fleeting Youth:
1 - Little contrast. More will help the image.
2 - Focus only in the face region. I believe that the focus in the body could transform this in a more didatic photo.
Hope you like the ideas.
Oscar |
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04/08/2010 01:02:16 AM |
Ha! Nah, don't ban the guy - he makes a good model! Just disguise him... :-) |
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04/07/2010 01:20:54 PM |
Spot on portrait. Good detail, natural color, no crazy "smoothing" or oversharpening. Nice! |
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04/06/2010 01:48:37 AM |
Fleeting indeed. Like the idea. The guy does look oblivious of this and fits the title. Most youths live for the moment. |
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04/05/2010 09:46:50 PM |
is this senay? i could be wrong |
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04/04/2010 11:28:16 AM |
Very nice detail and composition. |
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04/02/2010 10:35:10 AM |
I REALLY like the composition in this! (not voting) |
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04/01/2010 11:37:37 AM |
nice portrait with good catch lights |
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04/01/2010 09:48:42 AM |
really like how you have got the eyes looking. The direction he is looking though does not quite mesh very well with the rest of the shot for me. |
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04/01/2010 09:01:48 AM |
I'm guessing this is Senay, as I recognise the model. This is a really nice candid with great DOF and perfect focus. Everything seems really natural, from his expression to the lighting to the skin tones. |
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