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07/13/2004 04:10:57 PM |
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07/11/2004 11:21:25 AM |
Its not saying much for Nike. I don`t use either, well done 8 |
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07/11/2004 01:50:34 AM |
Over-exposed on the ball. I think I would have omitted the Nike part altogether. |
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07/11/2004 01:39:02 AM |
There is some glare on the top of the balls and a shadow! Also looks a little washed out. Tweeking the contrast would have helped I think. Great idea though. |
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07/10/2004 11:32:28 PM |
I like the texture of the grass and the way you have framed this shot. The tops of both of the balls seem to be over exposed. |
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07/10/2004 06:13:57 PM |
a little too bright and little too little contrast but a great composition |
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07/10/2004 05:23:44 PM |
A bit too bright on the top of the golf ball. Shadow underneath the golf ball a little distracting. Suggestion would be to have this photo shot on the green (smoother surface) on a golf course. This photo/advertisement has a lot of potential! |
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07/10/2004 05:47:44 AM |
Your balls are, err, over exposed... :-). Some sort of diffuser above this shot would have helped, some drafting film, thin paper, something to soften the direct light (Sun?) |
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07/09/2004 09:13:56 PM |
The reflection of the balls are to bright. It looks like the white is having a bleaching affect on the grass. |
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07/08/2004 01:38:22 PM |
I like how you show the difference between the two. The balls look a bit over exposed. Good idea. |
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07/08/2004 10:05:17 AM |
Great concept and I really like the tag line in your title. Focus, contrast and DOF are all good. The thing I find that detracts a bit is the composition. Think about the rule of thirds and consider a different crop. Color seems just a bit flat. Perhaps shooting earlier or later in the day would have helped. |
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07/07/2004 11:36:43 AM |
Do you really want to show a competitor's ball in the ad? This wouls also work better on manicured grass or astroturf, the lawn grass is distracting. Nice shot, try for a bit more contrast on the bal, the top edge is washed out. |
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07/07/2004 09:11:05 AM |
Nicely composed, but the image seems pretty over-exposed. Might want to try this one again either earlier or later in the day. I like the slogan. |
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07/07/2004 04:11:32 AM |
Neat idea but the highlights appear cilipped, taking out the detail of the balls. |
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07/07/2004 01:12:05 AM |
Looking forward to trying the new hx tour balls. |
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