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07/13/2004 08:33:38 PM |
| Noisy and he probably shouldn't be looking at the camera. |
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07/13/2004 11:08:30 AM |
| He would look more like he was enjoying it if he wasn't concerned about looking at the camera. I do like the fact that you made it obvious that he's at the beach. Good cropping. |
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07/12/2004 11:25:16 PM |
| Great piucture! He's giving us a look that says, you can't have any! great! The product name is very clear and in focus. |
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07/09/2004 02:52:12 AM |
| I like the slogan...very cool. |
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07/08/2004 08:07:52 PM |
| Good ad. The crop looks a little tight though. |
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07/08/2004 06:01:07 PM |
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07/08/2004 06:19:40 AM |
The boy's lower lip bulging out over the rim of the can is really unappealing. It looks like his nose is jammed into the can. Next time, take a look at some actual soda ads and notice how they are posed.
The cropping is way too tight. I like the background. |
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07/07/2004 06:18:38 PM |
| Your subjects eyes are looking toward the photographer. That distracts a little bit... shows he is not really focusing on enjoying the drink. (Im looking from a purely advertising point of view) |
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07/07/2004 02:54:51 PM |
| Great shot. Good idea. Suggested improvement IMO -- dip the can in water to show more water drops on it (greater impression of refreshing), and try and have the models eye straight ahead, not looking at the camera. :-) |
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07/07/2004 04:03:26 AM |
| very nice, i like it a lot 8 |
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07/07/2004 12:51:54 AM |
| I am never letting my kid drink DIET soda! 8 |
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07/07/2004 12:14:50 AM |
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