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Cildhood Unbound
Cildhood Unbound

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Challenge: Freedom II (Advanced Editing II)
Camera: Canon EOS-300D Rebel
Location: prospect park
Date: Jul 11, 2004
Galleries: Emotive, Action
Date Uploaded: Jul 11, 2004


Place: 113 out of 140
Avg (all users): 4.6519
Avg (commenters): 4.2222
Avg (participants): 4.6494
Avg (non-participants): 4.6538
Views since voting: 741
Views during voting: 262
Votes: 181
Comments: 10
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07/19/2004 08:59:46 AM
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
07/16/2004 10:04:31 PM
spelling unbound.you need to focus more on the girl on the right.
07/15/2004 10:04:33 PM
I like the angle and POV used to emphasize the subject and feel of the photo. Maybe a shallower DOF might have been nice also ?
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07/15/2004 08:28:34 PM
Nice approach to the challenge. I wish the girl on the left had an excited expression like the other one, which is wonderful. There is a color cast that reduces the contrast (and the impact).
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07/15/2004 04:48:35 PM
Nice picture. Typo in the title?
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07/13/2004 05:38:56 PM
their expressions couldn't be more different -- wish they were a bit sharper and the background tree was a bit more in the background. All in all nice capture.
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07/13/2004 03:54:47 PM
It shouts freedom... and fun. White sky is unfortunate.
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07/12/2004 08:51:42 PM
Ah yes, childhood! That time in our lives when our parents dictate our every move!
07/12/2004 12:47:33 PM
This is the kind of set-up shot that should be done over and over until the perfect capture is achieved. This is just kind of boring despite the action. The cropping at the bottom is too tight to get the sense of height and movement this shot needs. The girl on the left has the better expression but she has barely left the platform. The girl on the right has gotten some air beneath her but her expression is to placid. Without a frame of reference, it is hard to get excited about this jump. For all the viewer knows, they are only a foot off the ground. This possibility takes a lot of the exhilaration away for me.

The focus is a bit soft for an action shot.

The typo in the title should have been fixed before the deadline. That kind of error just looks sloppy to me.
07/12/2004 03:09:45 AM
Fun shot with great action and expressions. It seems like the photo is a bit undersaturated, so you might want to boost that a little. Still, nice photo of an excellent subject.
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