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12/17/2002 12:22:43 AM |
Critique Club
Composition This shot is too centered and I dont think taking it through the net helps. There is motion in it but not enough!
Camera work Metering could be better as the overall shot is dark and a little flat although there is good saturation of the colours. The fact that it was shot through the net is adding to the darkness of the shot
Digital processing Perhaps playing with the levels could have brightened this a bit.
My Opinion I felt that subject was good but angles and lighting was not as well thought out as it could have been.
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12/15/2002 04:32:42 PM |
| Looks more like the blue challenge. |
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12/15/2002 04:14:12 PM |
| I don't follow this as part of a motion study. Maybe you thought "e"-motion? |
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12/11/2002 08:11:16 PM |
| I like the subject of the shot, but it doesn\'t really convey any significant motion. The motion taking place is insignificant. The shot is a little dark, and putting the subject dead center doesn\'t seem like the best composition for this. Perhaps if he were at the far right side with the field laid out before him it would be more interesting. And while I'm sure it was unavoidable, the net hanging in front of him is distracting. This shot needs some technical improvement, but it has a lot of potential to it. Good luck to you. 3 |
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12/09/2002 09:53:22 PM |
| Great effort....love the "motion"...a little too dark I am afraid....7 |
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12/09/2002 04:18:49 PM |
| So dispirited! What is that thing? |
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12/09/2002 01:04:38 PM |
| Not sure how this relates to "motion"...? "E"motion perhaps? :) |
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12/09/2002 09:06:09 AM |
| is this capturing the downward motion of your team's record? |
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12/09/2002 12:35:04 AM |
| Focus is a bit too soft, maybe due to the net |
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