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12/15/2002 10:28:28 PM |
| very good concept. very good execution. i would have left it just a little longer, but the effect is great. 7 |
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12/15/2002 08:40:01 PM |
| What a great idea for motion! |
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12/15/2002 06:08:54 PM |
| Good use of playground equipment. Might have been even more dramatic with a longer exposure/more blur, but hard to know where to draw the line... |
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12/15/2002 11:30:29 AM |
| I wonder how many people missed the fact that you were on this thing too. Good job. |
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12/14/2002 05:34:27 PM |
| Good shot. Makes me feel like i'm actually there. I really shouldnt have had that last piece of pizza - i need to throw up. |
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12/13/2002 03:37:39 PM |
| Definately motion. I like the sharp focus on the girl and how you have the motion blurr in the background, rather than the other way around. Great color and lighting conditions. Angle and framing/cropping are good. I also like that you have included just enough of the merry go round so we can "understand" the photo. Good luck in the challenge. |
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12/12/2002 08:02:37 PM |
| creative. i like the framing with the two yellow handrails at the bottom and the tree and grass in the background going by. it would even have been better if you could have stretched the exposure longer to make the background spinning even more. i would have liked to have seen the girl not squinting. nice shot! |
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12/11/2002 11:10:53 PM |
| Should have blurred the background a little more. Good idea tho. |
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12/11/2002 04:26:55 PM |
1)Photo meet the Theme? 6
2)Color:6
3)composition:(4.5) I will elaborate.
4)Focus:6
5)Background:5
6)Lighting:6
7)Title Relavance:5
Overall Score:5.5 rounded to 6
Commentary:
This was a great idea with decent execution. Personally I would have turned her body in the direction of the roundy round and put her closer to the edge of the picture on the opposite side of the go round direction. Then turn her head toward the Camera to the point where you can see one ear fully and barley see the other. This gives direction and the full front shot like this is used in portraits for mainly men. Since you made this a bit of a Portrait I will comment accordingly. Never want to show the back of the hands in a portrait. That adds whats known as static and kills the lines of the shot. Another thing you want to do is break the wrist. You almost did that on the hand that is on the bar. A full front is a difficult shot to compose right. I would love to see this shot the way I described. I would bet you would be surprised.
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12/11/2002 12:19:57 PM |
| Nice trick. I think I would have cropped higher too eliminate the roundy-round :-) |
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12/10/2002 12:19:13 AM |
| great idea... it's even making me dizzy looking at it! |
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12/09/2002 11:53:56 PM |
| Really good use of panning (if that'd be considered panning) the picture tells a bit of a story, well done. |
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12/09/2002 11:02:30 PM |
| would have been better with no words on the shirt. but aside from that. good. had me tricked for a second. |
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12/09/2002 10:00:19 PM |
| I thought of that but the thing was burried in a foot of snow. Good job. Really see the motion. Jacko |
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12/09/2002 09:31:27 PM |
| Catholic girls don't do that---nice image--10 |
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12/09/2002 01:09:18 PM |
| Good idea -- well executed! |
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12/09/2002 09:59:19 AM |
| She looks absolutely thrilled. |
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12/09/2002 07:53:55 AM |
| i think this is a really great photo, good work. |
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12/09/2002 07:16:43 AM |
| Good concept (surprised this is the only roundabout based image I've seen so far in this challenge). That said, it would probably be a bit better if the woman wasn't so central in the image. (Use of rule of thirds, blah, blah, etc.) |
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