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04/12/2011 08:22:51 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club. You requested an in-depth critique on your image, and here it is:
The photo itself is fun - you managed to capture excellent motion blur. The perspective is great, as well. Room for improvement: A little action with levels might make this pop more. The colors are flat and the lighting is dull. I'd rework it a bit to make this an outstanding image.
Why did it not score well? It doesn't meet the challenge topic. I think you scored over a 5 because of the interest of the photo itself.
In a different challenge, this might have scored really well.
Cheers,
Alicia |
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04/05/2011 10:52:47 PM |
| DNMC, I am not seeing how this is disassembled |
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04/03/2011 05:54:27 AM |
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03/30/2011 07:56:25 PM |
| A nice surprise when it came on the screen. I didn't see it in thumbnail mode. Implied action in this is nice. I wish you could have gotten the pool cue sharp in there somehow. Composition is mostl nice. To make the shot perfect (compositionally) the middle white diamond, the orange 3 ball, and the male would have ideally lined up. Lighting in the bottom of the image is nice, the wall and the male seem to be a little bit dark. I would have liked to see the dark object in the left corner to be gone, and maybe some way to frame this, a vignette possibly? |
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03/30/2011 11:04:35 AM |
| Wonderful sense of action. Struggling to find how this meets the challenge. |
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03/30/2011 10:32:20 AM |
| I love the movement of the balls. It sounded so gay, I know jejejeje. Good picture man. |
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