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08/10/2004 03:54:00 AM |
| Lack of staging: these small toys and figurines are just small toys and figurines. |
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08/09/2004 08:56:36 PM |
| i think this could be much improved without the background you have chosen and making it much closer up |
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08/09/2004 01:34:25 PM |
| Very snapshotish, the composition lends me to think that the pillows are the subject of the picture. I barley notice the toys on the chair. Try getting closer and lower to the subjects to give a sense of scale |
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08/09/2004 09:58:47 AM |
| Pay careful attention to reflective surfaces in the background when you are using the flash attached to your camera. The flare on the wall becomes the focus in this image. Cropping in closer to the objects, and using different lighting would make this much more interesting. |
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08/08/2004 12:29:20 AM |
| Shows just small reproductions. Does not convey miniature. |
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08/06/2004 09:05:02 AM |
| A few problems exist here - the photo is crooked and there's a glare on the wall. Also, The background is distracting. |
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08/05/2004 10:26:08 PM |
| sort of has a distracting backround. 5 |
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08/05/2004 08:17:58 AM |
| The picture is flat (lack of contrast), mainly because of the flash lighting. The flash reflected on the wood is disturbing. |
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08/04/2004 11:44:47 PM |
| SUre you met the challenge, but you forgot to take a good picture. |
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08/04/2004 09:16:13 PM |
| try to create a composition. Some lighting and a photograph without on-camera flash might help, too. |
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08/04/2004 09:50:21 AM |
| I think this photo could be greatly improved by throwing a white sheet over the seat as the background is a bit too distracting to my taste and makes it look a bit like an Ebay photo or snapshot. |
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| Photographer found comment helpful. |
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08/04/2004 01:55:15 AM |
| Poor lighting and focus. Think about this: would you want this framed on your wall? I'm not trying to hurt your feelings, but I'm sure you can produce better work than this particular photograph. |
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| Photographer found comment helpful. |
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08/04/2004 01:29:56 AM |
| A different background would help a little... |
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