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12/20/2002 06:11:04 PM |
Critique Club Comment
Composition : I've always been a big fan of diagonal lines, and there are plenty here. I like the lines on the shore paralleling the lines of the branch, which oppose the reflection of the branch.
Exposure/Lighting : As others mentioned, the tip of the tree seems overexposed. I wish there was shutter speed / ISO / Aperture info so I could remark on why I thought it may have happened.
Focus : I don't see any problems with the focus. Well done.
Post Processing : I was wondering if you considered this shot for a Black & White? It has all the elements of an image that might do very well without color.
Emotion/Challenge : On first glance, I have to admit, I was lost. After some thought I realized that motion didn't mean dramatic or even fast motion and that the ripples on the water definitely meet the challenge. Way to think outside the box :)
Opinion : Peaceful, relaxing motion. Great slant on the topic. |
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12/15/2002 04:51:41 PM |
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12/14/2002 05:11:58 AM |
| The tree is a bit overexposed but the cxomposition good. |
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12/13/2002 04:44:32 PM |
| I think that the lighting is a bit blown out on the stick. Definately shows motion though, and your focus is ok. Angle and framing/cropping are also nice. Good luck in the challenge. |
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12/12/2002 10:51:23 AM |
| Tree branch seems a little harsh and over exposed. |
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12/11/2002 08:29:38 PM |
| I really like the ripples of the reflection in the bottom left corner. |
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12/11/2002 06:28:26 PM |
1)Does the Shot depict motion?(5)
2)Color(4)
3)Composition(6)
4)Focus(4)
5)Background(4)
6)Lighting(4)
7)Title Relavancy:(6)
Overall Score: (4.71 rounded up to 5)
Send me a message if you would like me to go in depth. |
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