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12/18/2002 09:20:06 PM |
Greetings! I'm part of the critique club and was assigned to your picture. We are all learning to critique in a helpful manner, since we are all here to learn.
The waves in the picture obviously meet the challenge of motion. The coloring, being grey, makes it a moody scene. That is fine. Not all images should be sunshine and roses.
Your perspective is interesting...looking from the water to the city. The horizon, however, looks unnatural at the tilt. I've had that problem a lot. What I end up doing is rotating in my image-editing program. Then I crop out the excess. If you'd like to see what I mean, I'll show you an example using your picture.
This image really has potential with very little editing needed to bring up a notch.
I hope you find this helpful.
Sincerely,
Grayce aka Gracious |
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12/15/2002 04:36:54 PM |
| Too easy of a subject. Shot needs work. |
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12/13/2002 05:57:14 AM |
| Too grey without actually imparting any athmosphere to the picture. Horizon not level. |
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12/13/2002 05:12:01 AM |
| The color on this is really drab. It could use a little brightening and some boost of saturation. I don't like the way it's framed either. It goes uphill considerably from L to R. - Inspzil |
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12/11/2002 10:36:33 PM |
| No offense, but it's terrible... Under-exposed tilted to the left and a little boring. :( Keep trying!! |
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12/11/2002 09:14:06 PM |
| nice shot but a bit too dark... |
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12/10/2002 02:24:03 PM |
| I figure you probably desaturated, but it seems a bit washed out to me. The motion here is in the mind, since it's not really visible to me. |
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12/09/2002 11:32:18 PM |
| I think it would look better if the buildings in the background were level in the picture. could have been a bit brighter as well. |
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12/09/2002 04:05:06 AM |
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12/09/2002 12:22:16 AM |
| Great! Absolutely great! 10 from bcncrazy |
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