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01/13/2003 01:50:43 PM |
Wow I didn't know anyone did that anymore. My Dad retired from that job about 14 years ago right when it started changing over to computers. Too bad you did not score better, I always thought the title of stripper was funny. Anytime anyone asked what my Dad did, I said the same and always got a gasp out of it.
Good luck with your future shots
Dodo |
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12/24/2002 03:11:47 PM |
Talya's critique (Critique club on break)
I understood this photo right from the beginning, even without the title, you could understand what your job was. I'm not sure why you placed where you did, you should have placed better.
composition - I think it's pretty good composition. good use of the rule of thirds and also good use of lines leading to your hand. Nice job on this.
exposure - this must have been really tough. with the bright background you did a fairly good job of getting your hand in there. Wish you could see it a little more clearly but it's understandable why it had to be this way.
Lighting - with the exception of the hand the rest is very well done. Nice job! no hotspots and very equally lit.
focus - perfect, no complaints here. I love the way you can read the whole thing. Excellent job.
fits the challenge - perfect. Excellent job with putting in the human aspect to really show what was happening here. I think it was very understandable what you were trying to do.
overall - i think this was a fairly good picture, it loses maybe a point or two for not being an extremely interesting photo, but the title helps with that. Overall I gave it a 7 very good job!
-Talya |
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12/23/2002 04:53:52 PM |
| Paul, this one got ripped! You should have placed much higher than dead middle. Not too many comments to go on, but it seems your title was a tad too clever. I gave you a 9. I liked it! Great shot! |
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12/22/2002 09:51:40 PM |
| dont get the title-otherwise good. |
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12/22/2002 07:02:14 AM |
| inventive title and great shot. One of my faves of the week. Colors and composition are excellent. Good luck! DPz |
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12/19/2002 04:31:24 AM |
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12/18/2002 09:43:19 PM |
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12/18/2002 12:40:10 AM |
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12/16/2002 08:59:11 PM |
| Wonderful humour, I get it. Extra points for making me laugh. |
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12/16/2002 06:48:03 PM |
| Very sharp well focused photo, Well cropped, good subject. Maybe a little dark, could use a little less contrast. Roses seem a little blown out. Just a little busy for me. Not zooming so closely might help that. Probably came in tight so could read the pring, and you can, but this made it appear cramped. Otherwise a real good photo. Nice 7 PTL |
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12/16/2002 04:38:01 PM |
| Heh... stripper.... too funny! |
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12/16/2002 12:52:27 AM |
| ha ha.... I did'nt know strippers existed any more? |
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