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01/21/2012 01:18:36 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
First impression: Hard to find too much fault here. The only thing that did jump out at me is the pattern on the chopsticks in gold, I would have liked to seen the chopsticks placed together to make a complete crane...well as much as possible, anyway :-)
Artistic: Very elegant, subtle and simple shot. Great detail on the closest chopstick. I like the various tones of red here all working together. Have to admit I like the Lensbaby effect, even though I do shoot the *other* brand!
Technical: Looks fine in terms of lighting, comp etc and the voters seem to have agreed. Looks like you used very little pp which gives you a big thumbs-up in my book. The KISS principle rocks.
Overall: This was a pretty tough challenge to get a decent vote in, and you finished at a healthy 6.2 and in the top 15. So good work kiddo, keep it up!
Feel free to PM me,
Susan |
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01/16/2012 12:05:56 AM |
Yee Haw! Rockin' LensBaby! |
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01/15/2012 08:48:03 PM |
Beautifully composed and focused. |
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01/15/2012 10:52:26 AM |
Very nice simple composition shot,like it. |
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01/13/2012 05:33:32 PM |
This photo is really cool. I like the simplicity and how you've focused only a very tiny part of it |
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01/13/2012 12:04:44 PM |
Interesting, pretty, red, and tack sharp where it should be. Nice almost abstract. I can see this framed in an oriental restaurant or a dining room with an oriental decor. |
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01/11/2012 08:25:58 AM |
I like the simplicity and the composition... the shadow from the plate is a bit distracting though. I'm also wondering if a slight crop of the right edge would place the ends of the chopsticks on the magic "thirds" line. Nice photo. |
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01/10/2012 10:36:26 AM |
Elegant simplicity of design. I think I would prefer a clear focus on both chopsticks, but I still like this a lot. |
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01/09/2012 03:46:19 PM |
Very nice minimalistic approach to the challenge. |
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01/09/2012 02:42:52 PM |
Very nice! It has an elegant simplicity that really works. |
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01/09/2012 08:48:40 AM |
shadows so smooth and subtle. |
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