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| 11/12/2003 08:22:21 PM |
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| 11/12/2003 08:20:06 PM |
The Sword in the Stoneby moodvilleComment: I know that you're probably trying to play by the 'rules' of composition here, but I feel that this one would have been stronger if you'd placed the sword right in the middle. The detail is great though, and I like the use of DOF. |
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| 11/12/2003 08:18:59 PM |
Sun-Tzu, "The Art of War"by ZalComment: I could be horrible here and suggest, to paraphrase Sun Tzu, that if you are not strong then you should not go on the offensive ;) I'd like to see more sharpness in this one, as the idea is good. I'm not sure if that high key background works, as it has the effect of softening all the edges. |
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| 11/12/2003 08:15:14 PM |
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| 11/12/2003 08:12:11 PM |
The Name Of The Rose by Umberto Ecoby ShannonComment: Nice composition, though on my monitor it;'s a bit dark and I can't see as much detail as I'd like to. In fact, it's so dark that I didn't immediately identify it as a rose. |
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| 11/12/2003 08:10:41 PM |
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| 11/12/2003 08:10:04 PM |
The Lamplighterby lbWhaplesComment: You really need to include a lamplighter to make this one work. That lamp looks like it hasn't been lit for centuries. Composition is good, and it you're going for a historical feel the choice of toning is also good. I would suggest straightening the verticals and a little bit of unsharp mask to bring out more detail. |
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| 11/12/2003 08:08:00 PM |
"Bell, Book and Candle"by SMW409Comment: If it weren't for the good use of lighting this one would have been pretty dull. You managed, however, to get good shadows and highlights. Looking closer, it may have been more challenging to try to conjure up something to fit the title of the book you used here... |
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| 11/12/2003 08:06:19 PM |
Prospecting for goldby Pop_in_OzComment: Nice colors. Unfortunately tbough, the foreground (i.e. the thing which relates the subject to your chosen book title) is a bit too dark so the whole thing loses impact and relevance. It's possible, however, that shadow detail could be recovered using contrast masking - or you could have used a graduated neutral density filter when taking the shot to darken the sky and reveal more detail in the foreground. |
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| 11/12/2003 08:04:20 PM |
Harry Potter and the Sorcerer´s Stoneby cimarron98Comment: Are the white oval reflections part of the image, or just reflections? This one is a bit flat - it may have worked better if you'd set it up in such a way as to create more of an impression of depth. I'm not sure that B&W suits this one, because there isn't a great tonal range. Given that it's a recent book color would have probably been more appropriate anyway. |
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