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| 06/17/2009 12:04:05 AM |
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| 06/16/2009 10:22:11 PM |
Reflectionsby hajekaComment: Beautiful looking building, would love to see it a little more up close and personal if at all possible =) |
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| 06/16/2009 10:21:24 PM |
Galactic cityby ELLIPSComment: Love the position, colors and strong shapes here. Glad I came back to finish off voting, because I had missed this one on the first go-round. |
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| 06/16/2009 10:19:50 PM |
So you'll reach toward the sky...by hesitantComment: I definitely like the composition here, but don't personally care for the border here. I won't let that affect my scoring here, but have a feeling it may have pulled you down a little bit. |
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| 06/15/2009 12:50:40 AM |
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| 06/14/2009 11:50:31 PM |
Take Your Childrenby posthumousComment: Not sure I could imagine a zoo actually using this, but I love the creative angle and presentation so still receives a high score from me :) |
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| 06/11/2009 11:08:37 PM |
Detailby bjoernComment: Hiya from the Critique Club-
For some reason it seems to me that the beads are a bit out of focus- but the breast, which is essentially in the same plane, looks in focus. My opinion is that the addition of the beads would ideally add to the interest of the photo, as a subject of interest. If this is the case, I think a bit sharper focus (or is it in the PP?) would serve them well- if not, I do think they draw attention and might be pulling attention away from the female form. I do agree with your comments regarding the position- perhaps a bit further to the right in the image might be better. Other than that, the only thing I notice is that the bright light in the center of the subject's chest draws a lot of attention- whether this was your intention or not is entirely up to your artistic preference, but I do find myself looking more towards the large space between the bottom three and top two rungs of beads.
Hope this helped,
Brian |
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| 06/11/2009 10:54:09 PM |
Remembering the Fallenby kaiser_chiefComment: Howdy from the Critique Club!
My first impression was along the line's of mikasi's comment.. the lines do seem slightly soft. You mention that you sharpened, but I might consider pushing it just a little more. Other than that, I definitely like the fact that you waited until the golden light was illuminating the building and the flag was being lowered.
I think to strengthen the photo as is, I would consider cropping it in a little further on the left, so that the flag poles frame the last side of the image. Other than that, the only other thing that immediately comes to mind is that the colors could potentially be pushed a bit further. I sense that maybe you're trying to avoid unnatural looking colors and sharpness, but I think you still have some leeway in that department.
Hope this helped,
Brian |
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| 06/10/2009 01:20:34 AM |
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| 06/10/2009 01:19:27 AM |
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