red line = dead line
by sixmacs

Comment:
This would also do well in this week's selective desat challenge! The red line is very effective here, excellent composition, clear sharp focus. 10

Hazy Day
by graphicfunk

Comment:
I don't really think of a chopper as a plane, but the image is very effective!

Transrapids at rest @ Paris Montparnasse Station
by johnmk

Comment:
I would have liked a closer crop, the people on the right are a bit distracting. Otherwise a nice composition.

Patience
by Falc

Comment:
Very good composition. I think this would have done well with a very deep DOF, to have also the flowers in the background in focus.

Waiting to Fly
by Pixelstate

Comment:
Cute bird! Good composition and focus. Don't like the border, way too heavy for me.

Waiting for wind
by aKiwi

Comment:
I see a filled sail, so they're not waiting for wind! Nice picture though, the contrast of the crisp colorful sail with the faded background works very well. Very good composition also. 7

Tower Window
by imolaavant

Comment:
For a deep DOF, the window should have been in focus. I think the composition could have been more interesting by having less wall framing the view.

Harvest
by GolferDDS

Comment:
Very nice capture of the colors. I would have liked to have the horizon off-center to make the composition more interesting. 8

yep...we have no bananas
by JenHall

Comment:
* From the Critique Club *

The composition could have been interesting, but the tops of the bananas all lead my eye out of the picture instead of into it. Texture of the banana skins looks interesting, though the picture is too small to judge well. The B&W works well with the overripened skins.

Could have been a reasonably good picture, but the size really hurt it. Congrats on the brown ribbon, although I'm not sure you really deserved that.

Message edited by author 2004-06-04 14:38:41.

Backham Strikes Again
by boogie

Comment:
Wonderful idea, very well executed. Only detail that bothers me: I thought it was Beckham, not Backham? Or is that an inside joke? 9