Landed on a golf course dangerously low on fule!
by siggi

Comment:
I have to take points off for spelling and grammar in your headline, but this image meets the challenge sufficiently. More people around the plane or on the course might have benefited the image.

EDIT:
In this particular contest, the headline is an important part of the challenge. If English is not your native language, I would rather you wrote the headline properly in your native tongue than write a nonsensical headline in English. We had plenty of time in this challenge to formulate a strong headline. As it stood, your picture was not strong enough to "fly" without a solid headline, and your headline was too befuddled to make up for the ambivalent photo. A newspaper photo should make the situation obvious, the headline is more like the title of the article than a description of the picture.

Outlook looks bleak for popular boat ramp
by mandyp

Comment:
Too dark, but nice combo of headline and image.

Have your shoes shined !
by ytugcu

Comment:
What kind of headline is that? Think about real headlines, topical, specific and active. Image seems overexposed.

Young Man Rampages Ancient Egyptians
by Hollywood

Comment:
Nice composition, fun image, not sure about the challenge, though.

Survey Reveals That New Camera Owners Terrorize Their Pets - And They DON'T Appreciate It!
by digistoune

Comment:
funny.

High Winds Take Their Toll on Some of Ft. Worth's Parks
by knklove

Comment:
A bit dark. Nice though.

Second Crime Scene Found
by DigitalNoob

Comment:
Interesting. Clearly alot of thought put into this one. Something not "newsy" about it, though.

Culver's Graduation Goes Without a Hitch!
by movieman

Comment:
Boring, a poorly composed snapshot, no focal point, no sense of when or where this is without the headline. This would be boring in a slideshow for family, let alone a photo competition.

The Man Who Made Our City Clean
by aksha

Comment:
That's not really a headline, keep it topical, specific and active. Maybe "Streetsweeping Back on Track After Strike" or "No Benefits in Sight for Kuala Lumpur's Laborers"

Land Rover Roller Coaster Opens in Cheshire
by Paulk

Comment:
Cute, good image, good use of perspective and composition, excellent headline.