Good Food Fast: Potato Marshals Midnight Mayonnaise
by raish

Comment:
I like the shot and compostion with the exception of the drink glass, which doesn't work in that position. I'm really not sure what this is, but I have never liked raw egg, so I think I'll pass. ;-)

Manna From Heaven
by Breeee123

Comment:
Fun view of the burger - the wings work here. To me the connection to the burger and the girl is a bit weak, and the composition isn't very strong. However, for an ad, the negative space would allow a great place for copy.

-H-
by sherpet

Comment:
Very strong, very graphic. I works well for this project. A small detail - the sky has gone grainy/noisy. You may wish to make a layer of the blue and run it through noise reduction.

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by dsterner

Comment:
This shot is soooo fun. As a stand alone shot, it's so-so, but as a found alphabet letter, it just pops.

Zen
by manish

Comment:
I really like the color and shapes. The long items are unclear to me and look alot like a slug, bad cigar or log for the toilet. That part's not very appealing to me.

I just looked up the original - knowing it's a terra cotta windchime from below helps me. ;-)

Message edited by author 2007-08-03 00:16:58.

U
by BlueZamia

Comment:
Strong image. The strong shadows work very well here, along with the interesting texture. The dof is not enough to keep the whole chain in focus and feels strange that the sharpest focus is half way back the depth of the chain, instead of including the bottom of the "U."

I'd also like the detail part of the upright pipe (rings) cropped out. It pulls the eye away from the chain.

day2-B
by scwalsh

Comment:
Alone, this shot doesn't cry out "B", yet I'm sure it will in the combinations in the poster. Beautiful, ornate and interesting. I just realized it was a bench turned sideways. Wonderfully deceptive, you've done a good job on bring the ironwork into contrast and centerstage.

In order to make it stronger, I think the focus should be on the iron work instead of the texture of the bench and grass. Then you'd really punch the letter forward. Although this may not be possible with your camera, it's worth a try.

B
by bassbone

Comment:
B is a tough one. The colors and tones on this shot are wonderful. You've really separated the letter from the background which is awesome.

Without the title, I would never have known it's a B. The bg also tells me this shot is "wrong." Cloning the trees over the sky would allow the bg to become more abstract and allow the shot to stand.

L
by BlueZamia

Comment:
BlueZamia, that's not a cheat, that's enhancement!

I love the way the texture makes the L pop.

The detail is just shy of what I'd like to see. Since you're shooting a flat plane, I'd use a smaller dof (f4.0 or so) to increase the shutter speed and sharpen the details.

day-1 "A"
by scwalsh

Comment:
Very well done. I really like the shapes and texture of the stone against the polished steel. The light could be changed to strengthen the shot. It's a tad harsh, but the shadows enhance.