paper rainbow
by margiemu

Comment:
Not quite a rainbow, as the colors are random instead of continous. The green paper in the center should have been rotated so the tape doesn't become the center point of the image or better yet, so it doesn't show at all.

Edit for Typo's

Message edited by author 2006-07-13 13:10:01.

no idea ?
by goc

Comment:
Interesting rotation of the image. It could use a little bit more saturation to make the yellow pencil pop more.

Handwritten
by betsypdx

Comment:
Your use of stationery is secondary in the composition of this image. This could hurt you in the scoring. I would have liked to have seen this with a different background color to better emphasis the paper. Overall, a very well done image.

Writing Upon Flesh
by otisXmike

Comment:
I assume this is a work in progress, as there is very little color with work done on the back. I like the lighting and the background but her upper hip breaks the contour of the body. Perhaps if her legs were straightened some it would help continue the flow.

spiral slide
by Rikki

Comment:
Great angle and lighting. This would have really popped if shot with a black background.

Paper airplane
by pinbokeshatta

Comment:
I like the overall composition of this image. I'm not quite sure what that is next to the airplane on the left. An apple stem? This distracts from the main focus of the composition.

He Tried To Put A Lid On It
by Tap10

Comment:
Interesting concept. The lighting on this photo leaves it a little flat looking. If you could have moved the markers away from the background some it would produce better defined shadows and help give the photo more depth. Another method would be to move the light to the right hand side of the pink marker instead of primarily straight on.

The Answer
by scarbrd

Comment:
Nice effect of the lighting through the pen holder. I would like to see the out of focus portion of the pen holder in a different position, as my eye is drawn to it after reading the message.

Tsuru
by pidge

Comment:
Nice arrangement. I would like to have seen the colors in the cranes a bit more saturated.

Dear Mom
by vprndsg

Comment:
The B&W conversion is very effective and well executed. I wonder how this would look with a little more noise to similute film grain.