Emotional Catalyst
by lionelm

Comment:
Lovely shot of the white house and the flag flying above it, good color of the sky, but I think the helecopter flying above it is just too high. Great photo though

Bridge perspective
by rogerspaul

Comment:
Bridge perspective
By rogerspaul
Critique by Silver Fox

I think the composition is fine and the photograph fit the Challenge okay.

It was a long depth of field with the length of the bridge and gives a good visual appeal with your dog prancing towards you like he̢۪s doing.

You got a low angle in your photo that gives a different perspective to your photograph and shows that you have some imagination and creativeness in you.

The problem is that you seem to be out of focus on the decking and on the dog, what happened here? See the branches on the left? Perhaps moving in on your subject (dog) a little more would have taken them out of the photo altogether and allowed you to focus more on your dog.

Overall, you̢۪ve got the makings of a good photograph but your finishing score of 4.8 tells you that you made some mistakes.

Correct them, go out, take more photos, clean them up, enter more Challenges, have yourself some fun, and let̢۪s watch your score move up higher.

Regards,
Ed

Message edited by author 2003-03-22 21:26:43.

Brooklyn Bridge
by dimitrii

Comment:
Brooklyn Bridge
By dimitrii
Critique by Silver Fox

Composition was interesting and the use of the fisheye lens was an excellent idea for this photograph.

The visual appeal of the black and white (would also like to see this in color) image of the Archway, the Skyline, and the Clouds/Sky, is fantastic.

Focus is nice and sharp in the whole photograph, but especially on the Arch and Wires.

Photograph shows good imagination and creativeness.

The angle and lens that you used here to create this photograph was interesting and adds a dimension that I̢۪ve never seen before in digital photography.

Finishing 13 out of 229 is not an easy thing to accomplish - Congratulations!
I hope to see more of your work in the weeks to come.

Regards,
Ed

bertula verucozza
by ivana

Comment:
You\'re supposed to shoot from ABOVE the tree, not from BELOW, so I don\'t think you\'re going to meet the Challenge.

Number One
by jerrft

Comment:
Oh God! Talk about being original! ! ! Something my son would think of. . .

Above
by kjarri

Comment:
Nice shot of the towers from down HERE including the night clouds, but you were supposed to shoot something from UP there looking DOWN here. I don't think you're going get accepted into the Challenge.

Watching Over Me
by 'Pong

Comment:
Nice job, good idea, would have been great for the St Patrick's photo Challenge.

As Above, So Below
by Nebularus

Comment:
Great idea for your looking up, er, looking down photo. nice shadows and sunlight too. Good colors.

Candle Lights
by ozaibak

Comment:
Lovely colors of the candles, like the way you caught the flames of the candles, nice job.

Follow the fence down the hill
by ladpupmoe

Comment:
Lovely black and white photo. Love the shadows created by the Sun.