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| 05/23/2003 06:26:46 AM |
High Schoolby AprilTheatreGeekComment: Like this for this challenge: has a number of compositional elements from the film, though the red is out of place. |
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| 05/23/2003 06:23:09 AM |
The Matrix is Watching...by tfarrell23Comment: Great detail and texture on the top of whatever that is! really tactile. Like the curves and patterns too. It's a power cable, yes? Took me a while to work it out. Good shooting. |
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| 05/23/2003 06:21:07 AM |
To the matrix, each human is just a...by aimee_skittlesComment: Intersting angles here - took me a while to work out how the background must be positioned. I think these shots need to be cleaner - or the noise more exaggerated - whereas here it looks like a problem rather than a advantage. |
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| 05/23/2003 06:05:57 AM |
Definition of Matrix - Fossil of fernsby ladpupmoeComment: :-) Rather desperate attempt to put across your relevance. Like it. The photo - not enough definition on the fossils (lighting?), and the untidy positioning of the text is a pity. Made me smile though. |
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| 05/23/2003 05:57:15 AM |
Jackin into the Matrixby scab-labComment: Gee there's a lot of circuit-board shots in this challenge, and a lot of green shots. This is in the top half - but the high contrast is bugging me, and it took a while t see the jack. Actually it looks more blue than green now ... :-) |
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| 05/22/2003 12:20:33 PM |
The Candidateby zeuszenComment: I;ve had to by-pass this shot twice while voting - I just can't make up my mind about it. Technically obviously completely accomplished. Artistically and compositionally ... hell, I don't know. I like the railings, the criss-cross patterns on the concrete beyond, the foreground brickwork, the very 'square' composition and the way it's broken up by those lines. Don't like the lighting much - whilst I guess it has helped the cleanness of those compositional lines, it's killed texture in any of those areas (I guess that is deliberate) and in the figure's suit. Like the pose, but it bothers me a lot that he's looking out of frame on the short side - ie why not have him looking right? This gives the idea to me that there is something going on that way that's deliberately excluded - I'd have placed him either to the right of the frame, or looking the other way. One more thing is the reflections in the top right corner/edge - they introduce an much more organis form into the image, and it doesn't seem quite in place.
Blimey, this has gone on a bit. really intersting shot, but there's something I don't like about it, and I'm clutching at straws. I'd love to know what the thought processes were. |
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| 05/22/2003 12:10:34 PM |
Energyby apriceComment: A good deal better than many of the 'hands holding things' shots. Lighting is good, though over-exposed for me (the flared out highlights on the fingers). The sraightness of the index finger looks unnatural to me, and the empty space to the right of the image serves no obvious useful purpose - you could have had mre of the hand and less of that space - not too far, but the battery this way is closer to the centre-line than the thirds line. Good detail, and that angle of light gives real shape and depth to the hand. |
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| 05/22/2003 12:06:28 PM |
The red pill or the blue pill?by hawkidaComment: Lighting issues - that very direct light has killed all the contrast and texture. Also holding the hand so flat on to the camera removes most sense of depth from this. |
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| 05/22/2003 12:05:00 PM |
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| 05/22/2003 12:04:39 PM |
Overloaded ... Coming ... Flash Matrixby gaja_tzComment: So much luck needed to get good lightning shots - I can see why you submitted it, but it isn't all that spectacular, and only has the title to give it a more than tenuous link to the challenge. Good work though, for all that - though it appears to be tilted a little to the right. |
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