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| 06/07/2003 03:47:42 PM |
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| 06/07/2003 03:28:33 PM |
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| 06/07/2003 03:26:42 PM |
Where's the water when you need it......by agwrightComment: Now this uses the same subject matter as another picture in this challenge. This image, however, makes use of the rigid red cap as a backdrop for the lively green liquid. Moving the red cap out of the center of the frame helps to draw the attention to the bubbles in the green liquid. The liquid has a soft, alive contour as opposed to the sharp, distinct outline of the bottle and cap. This composition seems much more alive and interesting to me than the previous post. |
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| 06/07/2003 03:21:22 PM |
Bubbling Mud Potsby BAMartinComment: Nice subject. I think I would like a tighter composition. I think cropping out everything from just about the center of the screen to the top would leave the picture with the charred lines to contrast against the liquid texture of the bubbles in the bottom of the photo. I feel that the extra brown/copper color at teh top of the image detracts from the focus. Overall I like the picture composition. |
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| 06/07/2003 03:18:15 PM |
Cleaning Timeby ladpupmoeComment: The color drew my eye initially. The white background provides a good setting for the contrast between the blue and brass colors. |
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| 06/07/2003 03:13:11 PM |
Detergentby paynekjComment: This image doesn't have any good focal point in my opinion. The red cap draws the eye but it doesn't seem to have any action. The action seems to exist in the liquid spilled (because of the bubbles) or in the brilliant green refraction just under the bottle. |
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| 06/07/2003 03:06:53 PM |
Liquid Chromeby mcraelComment: In my opinion the white balance is off in this picture. The lefthand pool of spilled liquid blends into the background at the bottom edge. I'm intrigued by the subject matter and the color of the liquid. |
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| 06/07/2003 03:04:57 PM |
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| 06/07/2003 02:58:09 PM |
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| 06/07/2003 02:55:09 PM |
Ink Blotby justineComment: I think I would have liked a tighter shot on one of the ink blots with the brass nib penetrating the composition from one of the sides or corners. I find the fingerprints in the ink intriguing. Also the different saturations of the ink and the differences between the dark blots, the random arcs, the lighter spills and the drying ink might make a more powerful composition without the curls on the left side or the writing (the M and the word Love). I definitely like the subject matter. I just think I would have tightened the focus either the ink or the pens with a single blot. I'd like to see your whole series on this subject. |
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