Cube and Spots
by oskar

Comment by mclaren_choo:
Great, I love this! how simple can it get!!!! lighting is great subject/object is great too!

Cube and Spots
by oskar

Comment by Glen King:
I think changing the contrast between the dice and the background would make this a more striking image. Try to make the edge and shadow disappear.

Cube and Spots
by oskar

Comment by bobgaither:
Need perfect lighting to bring out white maybe a little differnent lighting and darking the contrast

Cube and Spots
by oskar

Comment by Coley:
nice image...seems a tad overexposed

Cube and Spots
by oskar

Comment by faidoi:
+Simply and to the point. Interesting composition. Lighting is very good. I like how the dice almost blends into the background.

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Score10

Shocking Message
by oskar

Comment by jjbeguin:
Critique Club Time

This, I must say, is usually a surprise! The occurrence that this type of news would be announced this way though, is a little beyond what I am ready to believe.

The way you have stages your image situated it long after the original astonishment. I would fist have to recover from such news for a while before thinking of taking my ring off...

The good point of this image is you are telling us a story that will keep us wondering for a while. And there are not many entries this week that will do that.

Technically, the background is a little dull and the more than soft focus does not add to this image’s appeal. You would have been better off, I think, capturing the phone hand held (to situate the scene at the “surprise moment”) and having the message occupying more of the composition.

Hope this helps,
All the best, JJ

Shocking Message
by oskar

Comment by buzzrock:
For your DAD!! LMAO too funny-- 10

Shocking Message
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Comment by Firstrich1:
Very!! Shocking!! now lets talk abot the image:) when using a constant background even the littlest items can distract...like the speck just to the left of the ring. also the shadow cast from the light source is way to strong...maybe a second to camera left would have helped balance the light...hope this helped:) good luck!

Shocking Message
by oskar

Comment by Neuferland:
YIKES! That would the shocking! The idea is excellent but the exacution of the shot leave me wanting. The numbers on the phone are blown out and not very clear. There is also some noise in the shot. A 6

Shocking Message
by oskar

Comment by Gallatin:
Nice colors, well composed