My car has 2 light sources !
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Comment by NicNic101:
cars have more than that! heh, but not bad... if it wasn't as dark, more of a sepia tone, i would like it better... 6

My car has 2 light sources !
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Comment by redmoon:
The idea is good; the title might need some development... i like how the ehadlights illuminate the dirt in front - pretty good effect that. however, might i suggest that you position the camera on a more stable surface and use the timer to take a picture? i'm guessing the shot was hand-held, which inevitably leads to minor levels of shake and fuzziness. DPC is a pedantic bunch who always harp on about focus... the silver colour of the car suits the monochrome appearance well... incidentally, my uncle just got a c-class - they're very nice. if it were sharper, 8. as it is, i awarded 5.

My car has 2 light sources !
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Comment by daniellawley:
looks a little out of focus. But cool. I like the light beams.

My car has 2 light sources !
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Comment by taterbug:
good idea. i feel a lot of negative space. maybe crop off a little of top would be better?

My car has 2 light sources !
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Comment by Wildpurple:
7.

My car has 2 light sources !
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Comment by Zal:
The fog adds interest, but everything is out of focus.

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Comment by Nyala:
Great composition and sharpness. Fits right in with the theme and tells a good story.

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Comment by Ambo:
Good focus, lighting okay, but I feel that maybe you could have loosened the crop to leave the top of the knuckles, you have left good proportion at the botom of the frame so IMO maybe the same at the top.
Maybe just slightly tilted to the right...small rotation anti-clockwise required.
Overall a good compostion = 5 as is

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Comment by Jesuispeure:
Good shot! Minor, minor note- the hand looks a bit tense, which adds to the feeling of it being a set up. Turning it towards the camera slightly, or relaxing the back fingers a bit might help.

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Comment by caba:
Good idea, 7