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06/01/2004 07:44:28 PM |
| I like the idea for the picture, and I really like the foggy effect infront of the lights, I wish that it could be focused a little better. |
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06/01/2004 02:03:14 PM |
| I would like to say something good about this but I can't I'm afraid, overexposed and poorly executed. |
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05/30/2004 12:13:03 PM |
Every car on the planet has two light sources. This would have been better if it had given me a clue about what was unique about your car. Is it the location? Or the dust/fog. Might have been better to take the lights out of the photo and just caught the fog. The multiple light sources would still have been obvious.
Techniquely, everything is a bit out of focus and the lights are blown out. Balance of dark at the top and light at the botttom feels overweighted. |
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05/29/2004 04:14:39 AM |
The fog gives the image some interest but:
a) the top 40% of the frame adds no value at all.
b) Even with the top cropped out, there;s not much to hold my attention.
The "printing" does have great whites and deep blacks - a good thing for B&W images. |
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05/29/2004 02:46:52 AM |
| I don't know if this was a snapshot or what, but this sorta has the horror movie creepiness to it...very good, if that was what you were going for you should have thought of a better title...well you should have thought of a better titled anyways. Like the pic though |
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05/28/2004 08:09:54 PM |
| cars have more than that! heh, but not bad... if it wasn't as dark, more of a sepia tone, i would like it better... 6 |
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05/28/2004 12:17:31 PM |
| The idea is good; the title might need some development... i like how the ehadlights illuminate the dirt in front - pretty good effect that. however, might i suggest that you position the camera on a more stable surface and use the timer to take a picture? i'm guessing the shot was hand-held, which inevitably leads to minor levels of shake and fuzziness. DPC is a pedantic bunch who always harp on about focus... the silver colour of the car suits the monochrome appearance well... incidentally, my uncle just got a c-class - they're very nice. if it were sharper, 8. as it is, i awarded 5. |
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05/27/2004 11:59:52 AM |
looks a little out of focus. But cool. I like the light beams.
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05/27/2004 01:18:58 AM |
| good idea. i feel a lot of negative space. maybe crop off a little of top would be better? |
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05/26/2004 02:46:28 PM |
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05/26/2004 11:29:54 AM |
| The fog adds interest, but everything is out of focus. |
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