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Comment by jimmythefish:
Damn, no quarters for the wash...

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Comment by inspzil:
Looks like a security camera video. Reminds me of something from the crying game. I do think it shows despair and I think that the primitive look to this photo is fairly effective representing the point of the picture.

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Comment by civilsavage:
the despair of shampooing the carpet while in the nude...

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Comment by albright1:
Very desperate. I like the slightly fuzzy focus and the bland color of the carpet. The nudity of your model adds to the darkness of the emotion. Give this guy a hug.

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Comment by cvhs99:
good job! I would have tried to rid the photo of the white walls with something that matches the floor, which would have given the photo even more drama.

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Comment by Amiee:
Good image. Nice use of shadows and display of the concept. Nice job.

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Comment by 3boyzMom:
This feels more like shame to me...not sure why. I guess I have no idea what the subject is in despair about.

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Comment by ChrisW123:
Trip, just wearing a watch. Should have made it a B&W maybe.

St. Patrick's Cathedral
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Comment by tcherring:
CRITIQUE CLUB

This photo is absolutely breathtaking, making it very hard to critique!

CHALLENGE: For rhythm, this photo may be a bit busy. There are so many examples of rhythm here that you might want to focus on just one thing, like the pattern in that amazing ceiling.

TECHNICAL: I think your camera was set perfectly. There is a light at the bottom of the photo, and I can't decide if that's your flash reflection or someone elses? This is probably something you'll want to edit later.

POST CHALLENGE SUGGESTIONS: I would stongly considered cropping out the bottom of this piece. The eyes are automatically drawn to that amazing ceiling and everything else adds an element of clutter. Don't get me wrong, this is an absolutely GORGEOUS print that deserved a high score!

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Comment by Anastasia:
mmmmmmmmmmm .-) must be cold...