Whisky
by barbaraanne

Comment by Prof_Fate:
Critique Club Here...

Very striking image - nice colors, lighting, nice editing.

Not so sure about the composition - my eye is drawn to the bright part of the image, almost dead center. the top of the glass is lost in teh BG / darkness yet there appears a second image of it (a reflection?)Muddles things a bit IMO. The OOF table edge vies for my eye as does the (other glass/reflection/decanter) on the right side of the image.
I think a change of camera position would have improved the image - move the camera up a bit to miss the edge of the table and show more of the reflection in the table top and hopefull put more emphasis on the top rim of the glass. The item on the right - it needs some seperation, perhaps move it back so that it is on the back edge of the sharp focus, again catching the nice color/lighting and perhaps it's reflection in the table too.

This could such a wonderful abstract!

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by barbaraanne

Comment by jpdeloof:
the B&W enormously gives atmosphere to a scene and it is present here, a little more contrast, would have still given more depth to the photograph.

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by barbaraanne

Comment by ajgardner:
could use more contrast and focus

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Comment by Mikelangelo:
Not bad. I'd like to see something bring my attention to the figure a little more. He kind' a blends in right now. But pretty nice mood.

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Comment by Ivory:
Has a very nice mood. 8

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Comment by sacs:
Lighting seems a little weird, but i love it! It has a really relaxed tension feeling to it.

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Comment by casm:
nice shot.

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Comment by benjybobs:
What a stunning model, its tantilising, when oh when will he see his face? if its as pretty as his bum we're all in for a treat! not sure about the mullet though.

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by barbaraanne

Comment by sherpet:
Yuo have captured the challenge with you image well

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by barbaraanne

Comment by Falc:
needs a little boost to contrast, feels a little flat