The Green Faerie and Her Spoon
by JonLud

Comment by gaurawa:
** Critique Club **
The first impression was where's the spoon ? the empahasis in this image is not on the spoon. Also I can't relate to this image, so it doesn't appeal to me.

composition: very scattered, not a single subject emphasized in the image. I find the tilt good as it gives a different perspective and make the image dynamic.

blown out highlights are a bit of distraction

If you have any questions, feel free to pm me
-Gaurawa

Orchid 2
by JonLud

Comment by philup:
very nice..I like the DOF..! Looks great!

The Green Faerie and Her Spoon
by JonLud

Comment by kiwinick:
Doesn't it send you mad? fabimage I reallly like it 10

The Green Faerie and Her Spoon
by JonLud

Comment by hollisterGq:
just don't like the concept...good luck on the challenge

The Green Faerie and Her Spoon
by JonLud

Comment by jonr:
Why is it yellow? Otherwise, pretty good.

The Green Faerie and Her Spoon
by JonLud

Comment by sherpet:
nice angled shot

Highgate Cemetery Statue 3
by JonLud

Comment by CHILLED:
I LIKE THIS SHOT AND I KNOW THIS CEMETRY . LIKE THE WAY THE IVY IS ON THE HEAD GIVES IT A VERY DIFFERENT LOOK. WELL DONE

Milk, It Does a Body Good...
by JonLud

Comment by Chiqui:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Composition:

The composition is good, the placement of the model in the frame accentuates the midsection which I am assuming was your intention since that is where the milk is.

Background:

I don't think this background color works because it is to close to the model's skin color. Perhaps something darker would have worked better, it would have given the picture a bit more overall contrast.

My opinion:

To be honest, this picture doesn't really do much for me. To me, it doesn't really meet the challenge. I think that if you had used the theme "milk" in a bit more obvious way, this would have done better.

If you have any questions or comments about this critique please feel free to PM me.

June

Milk, It Does a Body Good...
by JonLud

Comment by stam:
I can not really see the milk and I am distratced by the zebra stripes

Milk, It Does a Body Good...
by JonLud

Comment by Cyndane:
Is that milk running down her stomach? Can't quite figure it out.. not super crazy about this one, and it all looks slightly blurry.