Hard at work
by yansermc

Comment by got2bgutsy:
Reading over the comments people made... um... people are critical here. haha. Good idea, but it does look like a snap shot. keep trying!!

Hard at work
by yansermc

Comment by boyd2000:
You need to work on the lighting. It looks too snapshottish like this. Too busy also.

Hard at work
by yansermc

Comment by smichener:
somewhat out of focus. The perspective is interesting.

Hard at work
by yansermc

Comment by denis415:
doesn't hit the spot for me

Hard at work
by yansermc

Comment by mchalmers:
Very busy photo, and that blue light to the right of the photo keeps drawing my eye.

Hard at work
by yansermc

Comment by mrsaugustus:
I feel that this image lacks real inspiration . . .I would have loved to have seen more of the subjects face.

Hard at work
by yansermc

Comment by violinist123:
Two things could improve this. First, correct the whitebalance so the hideous yellow cast of the indoor lighting would go away. Second, how about shooting this from an angle that doesn't leave me with the impression that the photographer simply walked up behind this girl and took a snapshot? Seeing her face would be nice, or really any other angle that gave me a more intimate view of the person studying. I feel like someone passing through the hallway and glancing into a dorm room.

Hard at work
by yansermc

Comment by nati_in_here:
THIS IS WHAT I CALL WORKING!!

Hard at work
by yansermc

Comment by geia:
you could have shown her face.

Hard at work
by yansermc

Comment by kurv:
Save shots like these for myspace, there's nothing 'beautiful' or evocative about this.