Sudz Down the River
by jitams

Comment by sylandrix:
Composition's a little messy with all those branches, but the water has a nice dreamy look to it and the muted colors together make an interesting image.

Sudz Down the River
by jitams

Comment by Turbotech:
This is intresting, but the only problem I can say is that I think it is a bit too busy. Too many suds. I think I can get a bit confused looking at this because in some areas it does not look like suds, it looks like clouds reflecting in the water.

Sudz Down the River
by jitams

Comment by Nickrz:
This shot has a very light feeling to it - almost like an 18th century rice paper print of a Japanese garden. It would not do nearly as well with an object of focus - as it is, it lets the eye wander. I like it!

Sudz Down the River
by jitams

Comment by jgillard:
I do not feel like this photo conveys motion.

Sudz Down the River
by jitams

Comment by bamaster:
I'm having a problem with the blur here. To me it's way too busy and everythig is competing for attention. Although I do not have an idea of how to do it different.

Longing
by jitams

Comment by emorgan49:
Aaack - This was a 10 for sure!!!!! What happened?

Sudz Down the River
by jitams

Comment by JamieWillmott:
The branches obstruct the water too much.

Longing
by jitams

Comment by arnit:
Great composition. One of my favourites this week. Good job. -arnit

Longing
by jitams

Comment by HBunch:
You have those horrible stucco walls like we have here. Definately blue. I think that the light gets a bit harsh on the wall as it nears the womans body, and on the left side of her towel. I like the half shadow/half light feel. I think it adds to the "longing" or sadness that could be feeling from longing. Focus and clarity are nice, angle and framing/cropping are good as well. Good luck in the challenge.

Longing
by jitams

Comment by Gorpie:
i like the photo, but probably would have liked it more if the surface was smoother and the swtich from differing light colours was more straight, maybe thats just me tho ;)