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| 12/18/2005 11:31:45 PM |
Fork Of The Futureby KitaComment by LoudDog: Greetings from the Critique Club Kita!
First off, I think it̢۪s great that at 8 years old you are jumping into something like this.
I like what you are going for and the border works well with the photo. If I were shooting this I think I would have left it in landscape orientation. With the reflection it just seems like it should be landscape as forks standing straight up and left right reflections just don̢۪t feel right to me. I̢۪m not sure if the grain and the spots were intentional, but again, if I were shooting I̢۪d have used a shiny clean background. Also, the sharpness seems a little off. Did you use a tripod? If you did, you had some focusing issues, if not you should have.
Good idea done pretty well. I̢۪d have done a few things differently, but I̢۪m definitely not the expert.
I hope you find this helpful. If you have any questions or comments on my review please feel free to PM me.
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| 12/18/2005 03:34:12 PM |
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| 12/17/2005 08:07:05 PM |
The beginning of day...by KitaComment by itsgodswork: i saw i photo just like this... i dont know if your the same one that submits the photograph but i can say this is a better version because the sun is not out yet and because of that you get more bright and rich colors.... and for that im giving you a very fine grade |
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| 12/17/2005 02:33:45 PM |
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| 12/16/2005 07:34:23 PM |
The beginning of day...by KitaComment by Azrifel: My top three for this challenge are all landscapes. This one is the same scene as the other shot of the same location. There is a nice flow of line in both pics as well as the nice smooth early morning rendition of calm colors. |
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| 12/16/2005 01:55:13 AM |
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