Pure In Soul
by phreak

Comment by helisoto:
Interesting shot, but a bit spooky!

Pure In Soul
by phreak

Comment by Retroesque:
The light is too harsh for this image and ruins the hues. The crop while unusual isn't attractive to my eye, as you've cut this persons eyes off, a little weird really.

Pure In Soul
by phreak

Comment by PHOTOKID:
the eyes are a bit soft, but neat perspective.

Pure In Soul
by phreak

Comment by JohnnyPhD:
the picture frame in the upper right is distracting, especially since it is upside down (in this picture). The wall or whatever the face is on is somewhat flesh colored which takes away from the face.

Pure In Soul
by phreak

Comment by TheStick:
IMHO the compositon and crop/angle do nothing to help convey your message to the challenge voters.

Pure In Soul
by phreak

Comment by albc28:
looks a little weird with her eyes being cut off.

Time Long Past
by phreak

Comment by idnic:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Well you definitely shot an image which concentrates its emphasis on a thirds point, however as it is this image is a bit uninteresting. I think if you had moved the jar to the right side, so the full shadow is included in the image it would have been a bit more dynamic. Also the bit of grass in the background distract, cropping to remove that would help. Good for you entering anyway and I wish you luck with future entries.

Cindi

Time Long Past
by phreak

Comment by DefyTime:
Is this WhiteRook? If so you might have done it again.

Time Long Past
by phreak

Comment by LalliSig:
Sorry but since you were already cropping this shot, why leave in the pole in the upper left corner? Also I would have preferred it had the shadow of the bottle been in the shot, I think a step to the left would have eliminated that pole and kept the shadow, what do you think?

Time Long Past
by phreak

Comment by boyd2000:
not much to it and you missed the thirds. I don't understand the caption or the purpose of the picture