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krizedasComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
Location 'fotoshop' says it all. I don't know what's real on this image and what's not. I'm finding it very difficult to critique this image, but I will do my best.
The text, which is obviously a violation of the challenge rules, takes up a large part of the photo and makes what seems like a beautiful scene cluttered. Especially with the fotolog link and your name which breaks the anonnyminity of the challenge.
The words don't make much sense. It says 'there is no way back' with an arrow pointing inward the photo. However, there is the other side of the road back.
The upper half of your photo is blown out and too bright in my opinion as well. The blown out area doesn't add to the photo in any way. It erases detail in the sky and trees, that I feel would be an important part of the photo.
Focus also seems too soft. The focus on the road is ok, but it's just not enough to make the rest of the photo interesting. I think I would like to see the grass or the trees or something else in focus.
Overall it's just not an appealing image. Sorry.
~Heather~
