paper = outlet
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Comment by owen:
Bizarre. Nice to see such originality. Keep it up. This is a fun shot, a real eye opener. Title is way wierd but good I think.

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Comment by zardoz:
A striking image, I hope it does well.

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Comment by dmbodinger:
original!

park tryst
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Comment by DigiFotoBuddy:
Greetings from your own critique club.

First Impression
Nice shot.
Composition:
Good Composition.
Subject:
Nice, meets the challenge
Technical (Colour and light):
The focus is very soft on the faces. I don't know if it's over done in proceesing or not. Not sure if you use NI to reduce noise. But the focus in not there quite right on the faces.
Improvement:
Focus.
Summary:
Nice over all image lacking the proper focus or processing is over done.

Cheers!! Keep shooting.

Ninja Lenscaps from Canon
by blackenedwhite

Comment by DigiFotoBuddy:
Greetings from your own critique club. Sorry, I was off the hook for a while.

First Impression
Like the idea, don't like the execution.
Composition:
Composition is alright.
Subject:
Fits the challenge.
Technical (Colour and light):
Don't think the border really goes with the picture. The lights on the lemon is blown out. When I look at the picture, my eyes first goes on the bright yellow border and then goes to the blown out area on the lemon.
Improvement:
Border and blown out as mentioned above.
Summary:
Not one of your great shot technically.

Cheers!! Keep shooting.

Desvasidized
by blackenedwhite

Comment by pineapple:
An interesting sensual image. Dark.

Desvasidized
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Comment by DigiFotoBuddy:
Greetings from your own critique club. Sorry, I was off the hook for a while.

First Impression
Very Nice strong image.
Composition:
Good Composition.
Subject:
Very nice.
Technical (Colour and light):
Very nice. I really like the sharpness, it makes the image even stonger.
Improvement:
More details on the hair and BG, but I don't think it was possible because it was Single Light Source challenge.
Summary:
Very nice strong image. Looks more like the shot from one of my favorite photographer on DPC - "Librodo"

Congratulations on your Personal Best. Keep shooting.

Message edited by author 2006-06-16 13:59:52.

Messiah Complex
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Comment by The Resplendent Snippycat:
The content of this picture is actually very intriguing to me, even though I am a devout Catholic. I do not find it in bad taste, although I do not like the florescent orange of the writing, and thought that the photo must have been spot-edited, so I only gave it a 4.

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Comment by Revecca:
Very creative and very nicely done.
GREAT JOB!

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Comment by Rino63:
excellent.