Veins
by photochild405

Comment by amandalore:
This looks like a snapshot for myspace, maybe if she had been posing differently and not like she was just trying to show the lines and if the lighting had been more interesting, maybe try this with a black background and dramatic lighting with shadows, try setting this shot up more artistically, nice start though, I hope that's not sharpie marker

Veins
by photochild405

Comment by Yllisme:
so you just took eye liner and drew all over her to make this awful picture

Veins
by photochild405

Comment by yianisn:
I think darker lighting, or even B&W would have worked better.

Veins
by photochild405

Comment by quiche:
Would benefit from more creative lighting.

Veins
by photochild405

Comment by jgm5015:
I think a darker background would some moodier lighting would have enhanced this a lot... good idea and very pretty model, though!

Veins
by photochild405

Comment by johansec:
With such a beautiful model and a great idea, you could have been more creative with your lighting and composition to come up with a winner. The lighting is dead-on and flat. She is too close to the background and the depth of field is one dimensional. You could have used all these elements to make your photo more interesting.

Veins
by photochild405

Comment by bvlro:
I like the ideea!
But I think the background doesn't work very well in this photo. Also the face of the model seems out of focus (it may be from resizing?). But I like it

Veins
by photochild405

Comment by vprndsg:
Could have been ALOT better. Marker could have been neater, sharper focus, better lighting.
You had the right idea, just poor execution.

Veins
by photochild405

Comment by Vapor63:
The lighting here is a bit way too sharp. Nice model and cool concept though, good luck.

Veins
by photochild405

Comment by sherpet:
"WOW", this is really triffic, and I think this is a self-portrait, and it is is, even better..... Well done, as I really like it a lot, and it really suits this challenge.