Window on The Universe
by dannylee

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
I lik this .. the angle works well .. is a little narrow for my taste... also at 406 * 562 the impact is a little lost .. try maximising a little up to 640 on longest side.

Composition:
this works but is a little centred in the frame ... is the horizontal was slightly wider this may have helped.

Subject:
meets the challenge with a lot of invention . .congrats on the "out of box" thinking.

Technical (Colour and light):
I like this .. the galaxy could have been a little brighter .. but it still works .. the flect at the top of the window frame should perhaps not be there.

To grow its vote?:
Maximise the size ... think about the rule of thirds ... and go for it.

Summary:
For the second pic this is great ... keep it up!

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Elephant Walk
by dannylee

Comment by hetre:
This is a great shot - keeps me coming back to it. Great idea and colors!

Elephant Walk
by dannylee

Comment by sherpet:
This is clever.....

Elephant Walk
by dannylee

Comment by dolphnz8:
Shweeeeeeeeeettt!!

Elephant Walk
by dannylee

Comment by DefyTime:
Very cool...great lighting

Elephant Walk
by dannylee

Comment by karenlee:
This is brilliant!

Elephant Walk
by dannylee

Comment by KarenNfld:
Well done! I don't know what those things are but you photographed them well. Good use of reflection and repeating pattern to make a rhythmic photo.

Window on The Universe
by dannylee

Comment by graphicfunk:
Very interesting.

Window on The Universe
by dannylee

Comment by Rooster:
excellent! seen that pic too. used it to send an ecard to a friend of mine. 8

Window on The Universe
by dannylee

Comment by LalliSig:
Hmmm, sorry to say that this just isn´t aesthetically pleasing to me, don´t get the black backround and why the window tilts like that. Not bad though but nothing about this photo makes me want to give it more than a 5.