Mexican hot-dogs, Navojoa, Mexico
by pcMan

Comment by wewillexplore:
Hi from the Critique Club~

Focus - it could be better. What is the main subject here? The man on the left of the coke bottle is very blurry and distracting because he has no light on him and he's in the way. Maybe if you cropped the whole left side of the picture and left only the bottle you'd have a better picture.

Lighting/color - it's hard to use night lighting that you can't control, but you did well here. The men are well lit at the end but too far away. Although this is an interesting picture, it would be so much more interesting if I could see their faces, see what they are like, meet them, you know?

Good picture, keep shooting!

Mav

Mexican hot-dogs, Navojoa, Mexico
by pcMan

Comment by pcMan:
thanx a lot guys, i'm not photographer... but i'll be some day =)
thanx for ou criticize. i'll do a better job next time ;)

Mexican hot-dogs, Navojoa, Mexico
by pcMan

Comment by geminiwb:
I like the DOF, a great scene!

Mexican hot-dogs, Navojoa, Mexico
by pcMan

Comment by Stewan:
Cool shot, like the perspective

Mexican hot-dogs, Navojoa, Mexico
by pcMan

Comment by subliminalis:
With a higher aperature, you could have caught the coke bottle as well.

Mexican hot-dogs, Navojoa, Mexico
by pcMan

Comment by vtruan:
Loose the coke and you have a shot...

Mexican hot-dogs, Navojoa, Mexico
by pcMan

Comment by frankenstein:
Nothing like an elegant night out! Quirky shot - I like it.

Mexican hot-dogs, Navojoa, Mexico
by pcMan

Comment by chalcone:
To heighten MY interest, you coud crop a little more of the foreground, and give a sharper focus on the guy looking at the camera.

My Self before a Flash MX teaching session
by pcMan

Comment by HBunch:
Holy harsh lighting Batman! The lighting on your shirt is aweful. Really way too bright. on your face it's bright, but not quite as bright as on your shirt. Definately puts you in an environment, and shows not only a physical you, but an inside you as well. Focus and clarity are good. Nice to meet you. ~Heather~

My Self before a Flash MX teaching session
by pcMan

Comment by carolee:
Cool how the light from the window is hitting you at an angle so it looks like it came from the computer!