Abstract Melodyby
tonodzComment: Greetings from the Critique Club :)
I think this is an excellent 'abstract' image. I enjoy playing guitar, so this is a common object for me.
The first thing I noticed when I saw your picture was your depth of field. At first I was questioning the very open f/stop (probably f/1.8?) But then I noticed that the one shimmering light is falling right onto the focused part of your image. This, of course, adds to it greatly.
You played the leading lines very well, and though it is an abstract, everyone can still recognize what the subject is.
To comment more on the lighting. I do like the lightly lit guitar, but I wish there was more seperation between it and the background. I'm guessing that this was window lit.
I enjoy the black and white. Color might have taken away from the mood of the image.
Overall, this image is very nice, and I agree that it would look good as a huge print on the wall. Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to seeing more images from you.
-Loki
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