Car trouble at the GrandPrix.
by jimsapp

Comment:
I don't like seeing the backs of people. Their stories are in their eyes. I want to see his determination, his frenzy to beat the clock...and it was all there - from the front.

Composition could be better, tighten up the shot. Give me no option but to look at what it is that made you take tyhis picture...was it the feet at the top? Then why are they there? Make your audience seee what you see - you can only do that by getting in close to what you're looking at.
5
-11n

Shotgun Salad Dressing
by jperez1690

Comment:
Great shot, both you and this guy - whatever he shot. Nice composition.

Look at the Camera and Smile Right
by daysez

Comment:
Good idea, composition needs work. 5

First Day Jitters
by DougPaz

Comment:
I don't like seeing the backs of people. Their stories are in their eyes. I want to see her fear...her reluctance...and it was all there - from the front.
Don't confuse candid with secretly taken...
Composition is off a bit - what is your subject? If it is the little girl then why so much competing stuff in the photo? Get in CLOSE and show me what you're looking at, give me no option but to see exactly what drew yopu to taking this photo.
5
-11n

Lender's Spokes-Baby
by brianeden

Comment:
Good photo, great subject! Wat a doll!

Cmposition needs work, maybe could have been tighter or adjust for poor lighting in the BG. If the BG is not important, then get rid of it by zooming in. If it is, then light it.
5
-11n

Ball Players
by gcosue

Comment:
Nice. Could have seen more of the crowd, or less (none) with a closer shot. Overall nice and fits the challenge! 6

Halfway There
by sohr

Comment:
Great idea. Could it maybe have been shot looking down more, as if from a kid's point of view???

Remember the paths you took as a yougin'?
by MagsCoyote

Comment:
What is a "yougin"? Nice perspective, classic.

Shedding of Innocent Blood (God Help Them!)
by Gracious

Comment:
Maybe I missed something here...? What the hell is the point? I don't get it.

Loose composition.

What we did! How about you?
by freetime

Comment:
Soft, blurry shot. Nice depth (I think?)