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12/14/2012 01:20:11 PM |
Someone else was asking for a critique and I see I was your sole 10. I thought this was the best of the challenge. Good job. |
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12/12/2012 08:32:42 AM |
Not a bad shot, girls never modeled before? I think she's found a career... |
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12/07/2012 01:26:18 AM |
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12/06/2012 12:56:45 PM |
good idea but execution needs a lot more work. Crop out the black sliver on left, have model's face visible and straight on to camera. Ghosting on right of frame too, light looks drab. |
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12/05/2012 10:01:52 AM |
This would have scored higher from me without that black bit in the bottom left. |
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12/02/2012 05:21:30 PM |
Do they use iPads for that now?
If your back wall had the measurement lines, this would be great. |
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12/02/2012 08:21:33 AM |
Lovely model and good concept for the challenge. The black triangle lower left edge distracts -- minimal doesn't allow cropping, so in-camera quick look at all the edges becomes important (a composition skill I frequently forget, which makes me more aware of it). Could use a bit more exposure to make the whites more glaring (befitting the dramatized setting). If in an auto exposure mode (where the camera tries to make majority of picture neutral grey), exposure compensation can do that (tweak based on preview or histogram, if the camera has these features). |
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11/30/2012 09:27:05 PM |
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11/30/2012 12:08:32 PM |
Great idea and a nice shot, but you forgot to crop out the black thing on the left side. Still one of my top picks. |
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11/30/2012 11:58:24 AM |
The annoying bit of black to the bottom left works really well in its job. I however like the image and the model. |
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