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01/14/2003 02:45:39 PM |
A visit from the Critique Club :)
I definitely recognize the song. Which means you have successfuly met the challenge (at least in my eyes). It's a good concept but the technical execution leaves me wanting more. The biggest problem I see is the distracting background. The vertical lines in the background do not help and the white walls show some noise. I would try using a dark or light background and more light. Also, I would try to be a little closer to the screen. Otherwise it's a very good song title that would make for a good photo. |
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01/12/2003 11:42:55 PM |
| one of the best songs ever. would like more macro thumb, fingers are great for close-ups. |
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01/12/2003 07:55:04 PM |
| Good idea, though I think this could have been done better than simply snapping a picture of it. The background is very distracting and it's rather dark. The white balance could be a lot better. |
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01/12/2003 07:26:40 PM |
| A real easy interpretation of the challenge. the top of the phone is blending in with the dark background. I think that the phone should be on a light colored background. The focus and clarity are good. Lighting is a bit dark, but I supose you did that so the green glow would show up better? Good luck in the challenge. |
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01/12/2003 05:31:52 PM |
| What a great blast from the past! |
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01/11/2003 06:43:19 PM |
| Clever idea - made me smile. |
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01/10/2003 12:05:16 AM |
| This is one of the best Interpretations of the challenge. Cleverly executed. The white balance looks a little warm to me and I donĂ¢€™t think the background offers any interest to the shot. (I might try to drop it out totally, black or white) or maybe a sky and grass type background. I gave this 8 good luck |
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01/09/2003 03:08:31 PM |
| Love your concept! The cell screen is just great! (Not too crazy about the background, but that's being picky!) Challenge well met. 9 Swash |
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01/09/2003 12:33:10 AM |
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01/08/2003 04:33:30 PM |
| You forgot the zip code. I can't call her now. :( |
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01/07/2003 11:49:15 PM |
| This is different, a little too dark, but nice. Lighten it up and give it a little more contrast. But good shot. 6 PTL |
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01/07/2003 01:28:17 AM |
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01/07/2003 12:42:20 AM |
| I dont care for the lighting and the hand has to go. |
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01/06/2003 11:01:33 PM |
| great idea! just crop out some on the left, and basically all on the right.. or just shoot it in vertical to begin with. |
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01/06/2003 08:14:13 PM |
| Could have used a different background. |
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01/06/2003 05:47:10 PM |
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01/06/2003 03:42:40 PM |
| I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT YOU PROGRAMED THE NUMBER AND NAME INTO THE PHONE. I LIKE IT. |
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01/06/2003 01:11:31 PM |
| I even looked at that song title and considered something similar... I love that song! |
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01/06/2003 11:34:27 AM |
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