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01/27/2003 09:06:01 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB
Hilarious shot. The bachelor's fridge!
This is a great story picture. How could we improve it?
Mostly, I think the lighting is a bit too harsh and glarey. You need to soften the light a bit. But how? Shine through tissue paper. OR point the light away at something white and reflective like a piece of paper so it bounces back.
Maybe also arrange the cheese so it's more clearly cheese? Try a brick?
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01/25/2003 06:31:54 AM |
| I just realized that it's a bag of cheese! This looks like my fridge, which is the funny part. |
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01/24/2003 06:27:26 PM |
| Good idea, would have done well in the humour! i like the reflections at the top. Good Luck |
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01/24/2003 05:18:17 PM |
| hey! when did you sneak in and take a pic of my fridge??? very funny! |
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01/24/2003 01:44:13 PM |
| Very creative. Obviously a bachelor as I'm sure the wife would never let this happen!! Really good color. I'm not sure that the reflection at the top adds anything and may have been cropped out. |
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01/23/2003 11:25:11 AM |
| The reflection on the top is distracting. I do like your idea. |
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01/23/2003 04:42:21 AM |
| Oh, I see, it's inside a fridge. Not a very interesting photo. Actually, there is one thing I like about it... the DOF you used makes that bottle in the back on the right really nice and soft. The composition is good in that it supports the idea in the photo and the title well. |
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01/23/2003 12:46:43 AM |
| I think this would have been a good shot without the reflections at the top. Looks like someone might be on a liquid diet, ha. |
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01/22/2003 08:01:43 PM |
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01/22/2003 05:02:30 PM |
| LOL. That's funny. The old food or beer delima. Jacko. |
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01/20/2003 07:52:07 PM |
| So funny! I love this statement about refrigerator real estate! |
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01/20/2003 06:43:14 PM |
| I get it. There's not much room in the fridge cause of all the beer. Took me a minute, but I get it. Pretty funny too. very nice focus and clarity. great color and lighting was nice for the shot as well. The dairy is a small part of the photo, but no one said it had to be the MAIN subject. Good angle and framing/cropping. I like the reflections on the ceiling. Good luck in the challenge. |
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01/20/2003 06:11:11 PM |
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01/20/2003 03:22:14 PM |
| a little too outside of the box...why is this interesting to you |
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01/20/2003 10:31:06 AM |
| Great colors in this shot. This is a super idea that could've been capitalized on a lot better. I would've expanded it some. Maybe have the whole top shelf nothing but beer bottles except one little pint size milk carton or something like that. - inspzil |
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01/20/2003 09:09:21 AM |
| a milk bottle squeezed in would have been better, this looks like a packet of potatoe chips or duritos. |
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01/20/2003 12:58:16 AM |
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