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10/24/2004 07:25:40 PM |
Nice glow on your sign, but the shot is way too busy, indistinct and disjointed to deliver an effective focal point. I would suggest getting closer to your intended subject to ensure that we look at what you want us to. I don't see much of interest in any of the background and I also feel that I should take some 'meaning' from the directional signs, but I don't see one. |
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10/24/2004 12:20:44 PM |
Different approach but not sure it's strong enough for me. I would focus either on the light pole and make that my main subject or focus on the WH and WM as a subject. I don't like the light as your main subject and that we are fighting to see the structures in the bg through the trees. I would focus on one or the other. Good attempt. |
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10/24/2004 01:59:33 AM |
Took a while to see where this was shot :) Once I figured out (with the help of the title) who lived here, it took on new meaning,,, Shame the trees obscured the house... Well done :) |
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10/20/2004 12:09:44 AM |
|sn't anything of interest for me in this shot. It's a bit busy and seems to lack a focal point. The tower with the glowing lights, and the flag in the background detract from the statement you may have been attempting to make with the arrows (a subject which has potential in my opinion). |
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10/18/2004 06:21:53 PM |
I'm just not crazy about this shot, I'm sorry. The composition fails to pull the elements of the photograph together in a way that is appealing. The very bright turquoise/blue spot of the turn signal sticks out like a sore thumb, effectively making the eyes go right to it, and then it's difficult to really look at anything else.The subject matter isn't interesting enough to make it a stand out shot, and the shot isn't done in enough of an "out of the box" style to make the subject matter interesting. |
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10/18/2004 04:18:45 PM |
Love the title ... and the double meaning of it is intriguing during election season. Too bad the photo didn't live up to the idea. Just my opinion so don't read all that much into it. |
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10/18/2004 11:00:07 AM |
the green arrow is very good!
but the stuff in the background is unclear and distracting.
i think the traffic light on it's own would have been better. |
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