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02/25/2003 02:35:35 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB
Nice shot and very original.
LIGHTING - Excellent but a bit too bright on the bow and too dark on the finger. Covering the lens with a see-through cloth would have worked well here, as would moving the lighting down just a bit (would correct both problems)
CHALLENGE - It does meet the challenge, although it goes a little towards sex instead of love. That's just being nit-picky though!
SUBJECT/CROPPING - I think this shot would be more impactful if the fingers were untying the ribbon, instead of playing with it, but that is completely a personal opinion. You need to either move the thong up to create white space at the bottom, or crop the white space out of the top.
PRESENTATION - The tones you used are perfect for this photo. You obviously have a great eye for black and white. The lace would have been more prominent on a black background.
Overall, a very good photo and original idea. Well done! |
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02/19/2003 03:36:01 PM |
| digital mold on her finger ruins a nice shot. |
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02/17/2003 12:26:51 PM |
| interesting image. the monochromatic colors works well. A bit of noise at the tip of the finger. |
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02/15/2003 07:40:30 PM |
| I like this picture but the finger really looks odd. The shadows on the top finger are very grainy. It looks like her finger is dirty. |
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02/15/2003 05:36:41 PM |
| Nice tone on tone. Good detail. Sensuous. |
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02/15/2003 11:14:56 AM |
| Love and lace = great combination. Good job. |
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02/15/2003 10:51:07 AM |
| the photo doesn\'t really say LOVE to me.. sorry |
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02/15/2003 10:05:10 AM |
| I'ts so cute! It's delicate and feminine! |
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02/15/2003 02:49:05 AM |
| Nice shot, I almost missed the finger the first time I saw it :) I think I would have liked this better if I could see more of the lace and what it's attached to! -annida |
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