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03/14/2003 12:18:52 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Definitely meets the challenge of leading lines. I like the way that the black and white creates the mood of a moist and misty day. The focus is a little soft but this is not necessarily a bad thing with a scene like this as it adds to the mood. I like the reflections in the canal!
I don't feel a different angle is needed to 'improve' this shot, but could perhaps give you another shot with a different viewpoint.
Good luck with future challenges! |
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03/09/2003 03:21:10 AM |
Concentration on the center tree and it's reflection in the water might have been a better choice. The barren land in the foreground and on the left is just that, barren! I also think returning to the scene for a retake would be well worth the trouble! |
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03/07/2003 07:10:39 PM |
Dont like this photo, definatley an inexperienced photpgrapher. |
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03/06/2003 06:39:51 AM |
Nice b&w shot. a little more sharpness to bring out the trees on the right side, but I like the "fading" as it continues on. |
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03/05/2003 12:54:18 AM |
Captures a winter day. Wish the lines lead to a focal point. |
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03/04/2003 02:11:27 PM |
I love the way the stream flows in from the right, cuves and heads off into the distant left. It looks so serene there. Good photo! |
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03/03/2003 10:31:21 PM |
Pretty good but seems a little blurry or something. Not sure what's wrong exactly. |
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03/03/2003 10:28:27 AM |
I like the black and white, but the shot doesn't really give me the feeling of "leading lines". A little more brightness and contrast may have helped to show up the creek a little bit better - it seems to fade to black a little to much for my taste. |
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03/03/2003 09:51:05 AM |
Are the trees the subject. Not very interesting to look at. |
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03/03/2003 06:42:58 AM |
this is a good line, but it doesn't 'lead' anywhere important in the photo... the black and white also seems to be a little flat overall... - setzler |
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03/03/2003 02:33:03 AM |
Your title hleps explain how this meets the challenge. Nice use of b/w. |
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