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04/03/2003 03:46:00 PM |
Greets from the Critique Club:
Initial impression:
Nice colors, distracting shadows, jumbled composition.
Challenge:
I admit that I didn't see the connection to time when I voted on this picture, but after reading the comments I now see the connection. Very creative and neat idea. I remember those days fondly.. Unfortunately I've found it doesn't pay to be too creative around here.
Composition/Creativity:
I'm not sure what to say here. The composition feels jumbled and messy, but I have a feeling that's caused by the shadows.
Technical/Post-Processing:
This is where this photo lets me down. The flash is far too harsh. Try more light without the flash nexttime!
Overall:
Not a strong/apparent enough reference to time. Flash. Good idea and great colors though!
-Matt |
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03/30/2003 09:53:34 PM |
| I use to do that. Interesting sub. |
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03/30/2003 08:06:35 PM |
| I can not see the time relevance |
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03/30/2003 02:17:17 PM |
| Hard to rate this for me as without the title the photo does not show the theme. Nice colors though. |
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03/28/2003 07:58:13 PM |
| The flash ruins this for me: what could have been a really intersting composition with more intersting lighting. |
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03/26/2003 07:26:35 PM |
| ???? Good color and focus on most of the paper. Flash(?) shadows seem a bit harsh and the lighting on the right edge yellow paper is very harsh. Challenge - without the title, I wouldn't see any connection, with the title, I just don't understand the connection (my bad). 5 Swash |
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03/26/2003 06:43:48 PM |
| I get it! A paper chain is something that people (mostly kids) make around the holidays to count down the days till Christmas. On Dec 1st they make a paper chain using 25 "rings" and each day, they tear a ring off so they'll know how many days until Christmas; thus, counting down the days(time). (I looked it up on google.) |
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03/26/2003 12:27:34 PM |
| don't get what this has to do with time |
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03/26/2003 12:02:44 PM |
| Nice macro, streching the challenge IMHO |
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03/26/2003 09:03:46 AM |
| This image holds a good deal of 'interest' value for its color and absract nature, but I am lost on the interpretation of 'time' in this photo... - setzler |
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03/25/2003 01:43:16 PM |
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03/24/2003 10:57:16 PM |
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03/24/2003 09:12:16 PM |
| Nice color, composition, but I don't share your relationship with the TIME theme though (nothing personal). |
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03/24/2003 06:10:35 PM |
| Nice colors, but the shadows are a little heavy. It would be nice if some of it were in very sharp focus. Original |
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03/24/2003 11:02:35 AM |
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03/24/2003 10:31:46 AM |
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03/24/2003 08:25:08 AM |
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03/24/2003 12:37:14 AM |
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