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04/25/2005 09:21:47 PM |
*Critique Club*
This is a very interesting building. I think that the scene you captured here is lovely despite being old and broken.
Your focus and clarity are really nice. I like the detail you show us in the panels and roof.
I think I have to agree with most of the commenters and say that I don't prefer the black 'frame' on the top and bottom. Is this the fence you were talking about? I think that instead of the black, I would prefer to see some more of that nice blue sky. I think it would compliment the rusty red nicely, but as is, we can't really see much of it.
I like the barrel in the lower left corner. I think that adds a bit of something to look at without making it too busy.
Lighting is simply wonderful. It looks like it was a very beautiful day to be taking photos. There is only one shadow from the roof to the left that is really noticable and it's not a distraction in my opinion.
Overall I like this image a lot (minus the black top and bottom). ~Heather~ |
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04/20/2005 03:31:28 AM |
| looks like you just paused a movie in Letterbox format. nice clear photo..good composition and crop |
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04/19/2005 10:43:54 AM |
| the black bars top & bottom are a negative to an otherwise nice photo |
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04/19/2005 10:24:34 AM |
| I like the photo a lot but not the border! |
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04/19/2005 07:36:35 AM |
Pretty good composition and well seen.
The black borders are hurting this image and a wider aspect crop would have looked better in my opinion. We aren't stuck to 640x480. 640x640, 640x512, 640x480, 640x400 and even 640x320 are fairly popular sizes |
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04/18/2005 10:45:09 AM |
| you should have cropped the black lines at the top and bottom in my opinion |
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04/17/2005 07:21:08 PM |
The image is clear and strong. I like the lines on the corrugated iron and the rust.
I don't think the black borders top and bottom are necessary. |
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04/17/2005 05:51:26 PM |
| The roof line and black bars top and bottom (are you looking thru a window?) take away from this image. |
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04/17/2005 03:39:45 AM |
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04/15/2005 06:26:59 PM |
| Good photograph of the building. Technically an excellent capture. Nothing leaps out and grabs me. It is a very busy shot and I found my eyes jumping all over the photo, not settling on one point of interest. Perhaps a different crop on one section building. Looks like my neighborhood. |
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04/15/2005 12:13:40 PM |
| I like the rust and broken boards in this image, it shows age and the effect of th natural elements. Nice crisp focus on your shot. |
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04/14/2005 11:31:37 PM |
| why the black bands at thetop an bottom? |
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04/14/2005 10:59:55 AM |
the fence boards/border? on the top/bottom is distracting
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04/14/2005 10:45:19 AM |
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04/13/2005 10:42:57 PM |
| black borders kill this image |
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04/13/2005 05:00:26 PM |
| I really like the way you've cropped this. It's a very interesting picture! The colors are neat too! |
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