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05/25/2002 08:26:00 AM |
Interesting arrangement. Subliminal almost. I'm kind of distracted by the seams in the fabric. |
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05/25/2002 03:20:00 AM |
Well done except for the shadow on S and I. Does draw attention there, but I'd have found another way. |
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05/24/2002 10:21:00 PM |
Could have lit this differently to illiminate the shadow ... |
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05/23/2002 08:05:00 PM |
The shadow cast in the front is a bit distracting. The angle is nice though |
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05/23/2002 07:00:00 PM |
The lighting is almost too bright on the white part of the cubes, and there is a shadow across the bottom corner. I like the way it fills up the frame and is focused at the bottom and not at the top. |
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05/23/2002 12:02:00 PM |
Good angle, focus (no pun intended) and DOF. If I had to take the shot, I would probably try a different background (even though it's not that noticeable, the pattern on the cloth is slightly distracting - try cardboard) and I would probably not arrange the letters as symmetrically. In fact, I would either have them fall random or just do one word that I felt was important for the challenge and leave the rest random. Small nitpicks, I know. |
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05/23/2002 09:09:00 AM |
it looks like there's a shadow (from you or your camera?) on the bottom-right quadrant of the photo. it's especially noticable on the "S" and "I" letters |
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05/22/2002 07:22:00 PM |
was the yellow tint done on purpose? |
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05/22/2002 07:09:00 PM |
I don't think so. I spend my time trying not to sin. |
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05/22/2002 02:30:00 PM |
Good shot but the yellow shadow on the bottom 2 pieces is a bit distratcing. Looks like you were doing a macro shot and that was the area that was in the shadow from the camera's flash. |
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05/22/2002 12:11:00 PM |
I like the angle of this shot. The shadow kind of takes away from it though. |
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05/22/2002 09:41:00 AM |
focuses, cosines, cousins.... ;-) -- Nice angle, my only complaint is the shadow in the foreground. |
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05/22/2002 08:42:00 AM |
I like the dramatic yellow spotlight effect on the s, and just taking in part of the i. Also how the f in focus is out of focus, leading the eye to the s. It took me a minute to realize that there was a stairstep spelling "sin is in", but that's because I don't play boggle. I also liked the repeats on "cosin" Lots of stuff to look at.
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05/22/2002 12:40:00 AM |
I can see where that game might end up taking up a lot of time... |
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05/21/2002 07:33:00 PM |
It's a shame there is a shadow on the bottom two letters - good otherwise. |
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05/21/2002 03:59:00 PM |
You have a really cool picture here. Why is the S and I in the foreground yellow? I wish the lighting was a little more even. I like the far away S being out of focus and making it look like its so far away. I also like the horizontal lines on your background it sort of points inward which works well. |
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05/21/2002 11:38:00 AM |
Interesting shadows on the lower front.... |
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05/21/2002 06:18:00 AM |
the light needs to be more in front of the camera to eliminate it's shadow |
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05/20/2002 10:00:00 PM |
Nice DOF, though I dislike the shadow over the focus'd S and I. |
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05/20/2002 04:34:00 PM |
if you got the yellow light on the "n", so that the whole word "sin" was in yellow it would have been a bit better |
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05/20/2002 03:53:00 PM |
Watch your depth of field. |
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05/20/2002 02:25:00 PM |
This is a good photo. I don't like the shadow in the foreground because it is coming from something that is not in the photo... Maybe your camera or someone standing in the light.... |
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05/20/2002 01:11:00 PM |
not sharp< strange color castes |
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05/20/2002 01:01:00 PM |
the shadow really hurts this photo |
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05/20/2002 11:40:00 AM |
Cosine...hehe. Are the front two yellow on purpose? If so, why isn't the N yellow too to fit the title? |
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05/20/2002 10:50:00 AM |
Creative idea. Shadow lower center is a bit of a bother. Sitll good idea, fun shot. |
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05/20/2002 10:02:00 AM |
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